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This Barely Needs A Title..... by ~MosoltovCocktail:iconMosoltovCocktail:



I told you I loved you last night;
but you were asleep, and I knew it.
Cuz I didn't want you to hear it.
Cuz I didn't know if you wanted too...
and I was afraid,
and, I still am afraid
too tell you while you're awake...

Because I still don't know if you want to hear it,
and I still don't know what you will say.

Do you love me too,
or is it too soon?

Should I love you now
or am I rushing into things?

That is such a stupid question,
I'm so tired of hearing people talk...
Talk about their relationships
as if they are scientific
talk about their careers
as if that has to do with love
talk about their situations
as if it fucking matters
if you love someone
or even just like them
shouldn't that be all that matters?

I guess, or at least, I'm told otherwise...

That kind of makes me sad...
That kind of makes me just a little sad.
That love is so different to everyone else
and to me it is such a true feeling.

I hope someone else out there feels the same,
and is hearing this right now and thinking...
"I know when i love someone
and I don't need to be told that its ok,
and I don't need to think about it.
I just know
and nothing could stop it,
change it,
or even affect it at all.
I love this person more than anyone could ever love another person;
and I know that for a fact.
So I don't need the outside world to tell me if it's ok
because I already know that it is..."
And I think that is where i am stuck...
Cuz I feel all of these ways
but I still can't say the words
while you are awake.
©2006-2009 ~MosoltovCocktail
:iconmosoltovcocktail:

Author's Comments

K, so, this is a song only because I intend on putting it to music. It doesn't really have a beat set to it, its more like spoken word really, but it will be put over music someday soonish. Its very personal. And yes, "This Barely Needs A Title....." is the official title of the peice.

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:iconthe-beautiful-red:
wow... this is so beautiful.. it will make a beautiful song i feel..

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What The Hell Am I Doing Here?
...I Don't Belong Here

And She Thought That Happiness Was A Mess That Sat On Her Doorway
:iconville13:
thats really good...wow...

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Josh & Doon :date: 12/5/05 :heart:
Make art, not war. :peace:
:iconmosoltovcocktail:
thank you. i seriously considered not posting this at all. but lots of people like it, so im glad i did.

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"Being original is great,
But so is being honest."
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